Savage Scavenge (MaryJanice Davidson in Charming the Snake) – Chapter Seven

Chapter seven brings us sex. And yeah, if you missed the build-up to that scene, no I haven’t left anything out, it just wasn’t there.

I have to admit that this sex-scene is a lot better than the others I’ve read so far for this blog. Probably because it’s really short. But there’s always things to bitch about.

Anyway, let’s get going. No names are mentioned, but from the guy’s monologue, we can guess that it’s Jaz and Gladys.

He propped himself up on his elbows to watch. “Seriously, this is not how I pictured the evening ending. Nope. I figured — ah! — you’d have a beer to prove you didn’t care — when we all know — oooh! — you do care, and then you’d insist on a ride home and — and — and s-sulk all the way, and that would be that. Ouch! Watch the teeth.”

Why does he talk about that? I mean, what does he care about that in that instant? Maybe I am very prejudiced and have a wrong picture about guys, but I never encountered one, who wondered how he got a blow job – at least aloud – while the job was still being done.

Anyway, of course she’s perfect, when she’s naked, because if she wasn’t the sex scene would be sooo gross…

After a bit of joking [which is actually really nice, people should joke more often in bed], they really get to it.

She slipped gracefully to her feet, straddled him, spread her knees on either side of his hips, and then she was impaling herself on him [look, I really don’t like the impaling analogy. I always have to think about Vlad Tepes – not sexy. But at least she’s impaling herself and not impaling him within her], sliding down with delicious friction.
“Oh, my Gaaaaawwwddd ” was the most he could contribute to the conversation. [I’m sorry, but I think that the conversation – in the classic sense – ended a few moments ago. And anyway, it’s not much of a contribution.] She was all hot silk [Puh-lease…] and, when she swung forward, he could smell her hair, a clean, dark smell, like jungle orchids.
“Holy Mother!” [Please don’t call me that in bed.]
“Yes.” [She apparently likes it, though.]

Well, Jaz pretty quickly reaches his climax (no sign of that in Gladys).

“I’m really sorry,” he groaned, “but I’m going to come now.”
He could see her teeth in the dark as she smiled at him. For some reason, that gave him a chill. He didn’t like that smile. At all. [Cue ominous music, possibly from an organ.]
“That’s all right,” she said. “I’ve just about got what I needed.”

Okay, remember what I said about the pills in chapter two? I think my theory about the sterilising part was just proven to be true and she decided that she wanted to have a kid with Jaz, before she could have no kid at all. Or something.

In any case, if you were only after his sperm, why not combine business with pleasure and see that you come, too? It’s not like an orgasm reduces your chance of conception. At least, not as far as I know.

Well, that’s not Gladys’s plan and makes him come faster by tickling his balls [yes, Davidson actually wrote she “tickled his balls”. Yay! It’s great when people actually call things by their names] and that’s the end of that [chapter].


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